1Hand

Sup, Yup def got the drums kickin nice. Smooth piano layin with ms melody. I like this idea so far and besides levels which I am sure you already got plans for, advice I have none, beyond what I could do with the sounds. Very interesting and thank you for sharing. Peace.

Hey man, Yeah I was referring to the volume levels. Did some comparison of your track to others in the same genre. What you have here is a good structure drums are really good, but the string you have sounds like it needs another instrument to play along with it because I think it sits above everything else by itself. You got some space to add another synth (in my mind I hear the string then that extra synth (or vocals maybe) goes duht datta dah duht daahh lol you know?) I'm not sure what you're aiming for it just might be fine but something about that string is not sitting right in the mix when I listen again. I do like this idea though. My apologies for not being much help, Im stuck about this instrumental too ha. Try listening to it without the string and see if anything comes to mind. Keep at it, Peace.

Hello 1 Hand, Good 1st attempt. The padded strings have a nice seat with the drums, the effected synth in the background connects them. The guitar adds a nice flavor to the overall feel of the sound. I think you have enough going on here but does sound like something is off balance. Maybe try something in level mixing area. The guitar and effected synth might not be loud enough. I think that might be the case. Good simplistic melodies that kept the listen interested, also liked the knocking kit. Just enjoy messin around, it will be clear when its time. Thanks for sharing, Peace.

Check out some of the forums here. If they don't have the help you need already posted I'm sure someone will take the time to help you with your music. Just to save time give a specific description of your music. making process and the program that you use. If all else fails then contact me with your information via looperman and I'll try to help.

spit some lyrics and posted on reverbnation.com artists "Progress & Evolve" song "I'm So Sick"
thanks for posting the beat hope u like the track. Evolve

Im not a producer. I just been doing this long enough, to pick up on things. That producers tell me about.

A fake snare is a snare that is not part of the tempo per say. Like normally the snare drives the tempo/BPM.

A fake snare, is just a quickly done double snare. Where one of the hits, doesnt land on the tempo. Yet it sounds right and fills in the beat.
I call it fake, because I do not need to hit that snare. In order to remain on beat. I could stutter a word on it, but I dont need to.
So if it was at first "boom boom snare, boom, snare" Its now "boom boom snare, boom, snare snare" Or how ever it ends up sounding good to you.

Like how you made each sound so profound.
But at same time, I think thats whats wrong with it.

I feel a fake snare or just 1 more sound, would make it more fluid. But don't go crazy.
Super slow as is. Sorta like if I hit this beat, Id want my voice to be chopped and screwed.
I indeed like it though.

Get at me if you re-tool this, then want written lyrics for it. keith89115@yahoo.com

yo man just wondering, mind if i use a couple of your beats to make some local freestyle tracks and /or a mixtape? hit me up id like to know cause your beats are hot!
aka quicky qwix

Track sounds great. Has a lot of atmosphere to it. Stands as is quite well but would really benefit from some vocals.

All The Best

John

Hmm... I wonder where that drum loop came from :) I like it so far, especially the different space-like sounds you have in there