RyanSeverns

RyanSeverns

Determined :)
Elizabethtown, KY, United States
Joined : 12th Jan 2011 - 14 years ago
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JWilson
JWilson 12th Jan 2011 17:22 - 14 years ago

on Just Kiss Me by RyanSeverns
This sounds really cool. Sounds like a quality pop tune. I like the chorus a lot. The sequenced hook is really good. Great song you have here.
RyanSeverns
RyanSeverns replied Unknown
Thank you so much, JWilson! I had a lot of fun recording this one; glad you enjoy it!
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 12th Jan 2011 15:56 - 14 years ago

on In Awe Of You by RyanSeverns
Another great track man, you have a good voice, the track has a nice quality to it, good lyrics.
RyanSeverns
RyanSeverns replied Unknown
Thank you once again :) I'll be sure to let you know when I upload some of my new tracks
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 12th Jan 2011 15:55 - 14 years ago

on Gonna Get Better by RyanSeverns
Good track, saw your introduction on the forums thought I would check out your tracks, so far everything I have heard has been really good. Welcome to the site.
RyanSeverns
RyanSeverns replied Unknown
Thank you so much, ImproveWithError! Thanks for listening; glad you enjoyed what you have heard so far! Much more in the making to share, so keep in touch :)
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 12th Jan 2011 05:52 - 14 years ago

on Gonna Get Better by RyanSeverns
I was intrigued by my first listen to one of your tunes, so I had to sample another.

This is good.

This is really good. I can hear the MJ influence.

Damn, you are a great musician, with a terrific ear for putting the right instruments in the right spots. Love the mix on this one, everything is sitting nicely. Great vocal work (you have good range).

Love the bridge, it's a magical moment. You have mad skills and I'm going to have to add this one to my favorites. Outstanding effort.

Bear
RyanSeverns
RyanSeverns replied Unknown
Once again, thank you for the great feedback and your kind words :) I appreciate you adding the track as a favorite and for leaving me with encouraging words. I have 17 new tracks in the making right now that have all but the vocals laid down, so please feel free to come back and let me know what you think of them.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 12th Jan 2011 05:44 - 14 years ago

on Just Kiss Me by RyanSeverns
Mr. Severns, welcome to the Loop. Very nice work on this one. It is definitely current.

I will be honest, I'm not a fan of the effect on your vox on the verse, but man, when you kick in the real Mr. Severns at the chorus, your voice is exceptional.

This track is almost perfect, except for that small vox issue (sorry, it almost sounds muffled.....).

I could hear this one being played on the radio....one would think there are several artists who would jump all over this one.

All in all, I would say this is an excellent effort, well written, great instrumentation, a really nice track. Respect.

Bear
RyanSeverns
RyanSeverns replied Unknown
Thanks so much for your review, Bear :) I appreciate the feedback & advice concerning the vox on the verses. It is definitely one of my areas I am working on improving & updating my hardware eventually! Thanks again!
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