RyanSeverns

This sounds really cool. Sounds like a quality pop tune. I like the chorus a lot. The sequenced hook is really good. Great song you have here.

Another great track man, you have a good voice, the track has a nice quality to it, good lyrics.

Good track, saw your introduction on the forums thought I would check out your tracks, so far everything I have heard has been really good. Welcome to the site.

I was intrigued by my first listen to one of your tunes, so I had to sample another.

This is good.

This is really good. I can hear the MJ influence.

Damn, you are a great musician, with a terrific ear for putting the right instruments in the right spots. Love the mix on this one, everything is sitting nicely. Great vocal work (you have good range).

Love the bridge, it's a magical moment. You have mad skills and I'm going to have to add this one to my favorites. Outstanding effort.

Bear

Mr. Severns, welcome to the Loop. Very nice work on this one. It is definitely current.

I will be honest, I'm not a fan of the effect on your vox on the verse, but man, when you kick in the real Mr. Severns at the chorus, your voice is exceptional.

This track is almost perfect, except for that small vox issue (sorry, it almost sounds muffled.....).

I could hear this one being played on the radio....one would think there are several artists who would jump all over this one.

All in all, I would say this is an excellent effort, well written, great instrumentation, a really nice track. Respect.

Bear