Is it an intro? I love it. I love how you speak over it with so much feeling. If you going for rapping then it does not have a cadence to it. But if you going to speak over it I think you should use the beat as back ground noise to set the vocal as a priority over the instrumental. But listen to BIG KRIT's WTF off his King Remembered in Time album if your trying to rap over. He does something interesting with his flow.
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Vocal Fade in is beautiful.
Over all this is a amazing track.
Rock Chords at the back sound nice.
Cheers Life
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One Vizun
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Great beat!
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