I think it's a good tune, but I think it would improve putting lyrics ... I think that is one of those rhythms in the voice, take them to another level.
Thanks, Vican. I appreciate the feedback. A number of my fellow musicians feel the same way - almosts seems like a waste of space, as it were - without placing lyrics into the mix. I have a few ideas and may be running with that shortly. As an instrumental, it's worked rather well at cocktail parties, wedding receptions and the like. With lyrics, however - it could open the audience up to a larger venue.
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All The Best
John
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Thanks again for reaching out.
Paul