This one has a very strong beat, and it's definitely pleasant to listen to, but I have to say "Girl you are my fire" is a lot more mature as a song.
When you play keyboards (or however you inputed it), be careful that it doesn't sound too much like the 1-finger method; I think you play something like E-F-A-G which works, but then you go up to -B-C and then not only doesn't fit the "mode", it's also a bit too... simple? Make it more surprising and exciting.
Anyway, I think you have something good here, but both "girl" and "Something" which I'm listening to in the background as I write this are stronger, so I know you can make it even better!
Good luck man. Please take this as constructive criticism, I like it :)
Very nice and chill track. Perfect for a windy Friday morning when you're still not fully awake despite 2 cups of tea and one coffee.
So, I love it; one thing that could make it even better is if you would have some break or countermelody or variation about say two-third way in (say around the 2:28 mark?) But great song regardless and I'll check out some more of your work!
on Guest ft Equinox by outersector
on Guest ft Equinox by outersector
on Guest ft Equinox by outersector
When you play keyboards (or however you inputed it), be careful that it doesn't sound too much like the 1-finger method; I think you play something like E-F-A-G which works, but then you go up to -B-C and then not only doesn't fit the "mode", it's also a bit too... simple? Make it more surprising and exciting.
Anyway, I think you have something good here, but both "girl" and "Something" which I'm listening to in the background as I write this are stronger, so I know you can make it even better!
Good luck man. Please take this as constructive criticism, I like it :)
on Girl You Are My Fire by outersector
So, I love it; one thing that could make it even better is if you would have some break or countermelody or variation about say two-third way in (say around the 2:28 mark?) But great song regardless and I'll check out some more of your work!