well the music has a great message in it. im not one to be a critic, but you must make your vocals stronger. practice everyday, dont eat sweets, it bad on you voice. honey green tea. start humming and then hold them. this teaches you to hold a note properly. sing from your the pit of your stomach. if you muffle your vocal by singing the way you talk, people will notice the differents.anyways try doing that for about 2 weeks and notice the difference.o and learn to catch the beat on point also.
what version of garageband do u have? because the slashing music box tune u got i also tried to use in garageband and it's 30 bit format or something wouldn't work. cool song btw, vocals may need a little work but hey what do i know.
Beat is good, very nice mix, I almost wanna say i hear a beat from my buddy califken...close to it...perhaps look for a vocalist to sing on this for you? Good tone but needs alot of work vocally...practice makes perfect:D Keep it up bro!!!!
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love the song concept, ima slave to myself! good job.
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I'm no singer so who am i to say anything about flat singing :)
The vocals do get better though, they actually get quite good :)
a very nice track
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some times i have a hard time trying to hit the notes but that is not my best work i have done.
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