I really enjoy the beat. However around 00:38 it sounds like you doubled up the drums so it sounds way too loud and it also sounds like they arent lined up perfectly so you're getting an overly loud and delayed sound (sounds like a flange) around the 00:38 mark. Also the triangle doesnt sit well with the rest of the song. And the cymbal you used in the beginning is way too electronic and distorted. Like the bass drum, the finger snaps. This song is good as a drum beat, but you need the rest of it. All in all, well done.
Glad you enjoyed it. I figured there were a lot of errors. The drums were doubled-up, yes. I'm finding that problem with a lot of things that I do, and I haven't figured out how to stop that yet. As for the other sounds that didn't quite match up right...those were things I threw in there because I knew something along the lines of that sound would fit...but I don't yet know how to make the sounds myself, and I haven't found a loop that sounds quite right. I need to learn a lot more about the technical aspects, I know. For me, there's a lot to this program, and it's a bit difficult without an instruction manual (got the program from a friend). Thanks so much for the review, though. I really appreciate your time.
Thanks a lot. :-) The beat was originally something different...but I kinda took it apart and made my own lil thing out of it. I'm not quite sure what I can do for strings, but I think I'll upload it again and make it downloadable so people can maybe show me what they can do to make it better.
Thanks! Yeah, def incomplete...by far. I have ideas on what to do with it...I just need to figure out how to do it all. Still very unfamiliar with the program and everything it can do. Thanks for the feedback!
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that is one CRAZY DRUM LOOP
HITS HARD
i think some nice STRINGZ would be perfect
but then again i just luv STRINGZ...
ahahaha
if you added some horns you'd have a
CLUB BANGIN' CRUNK TRACK FO'SHO
keep on tha GRIND
Much Respect from LA
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maybe a synth, piano, e-guitar wud really improve this !