This is a great UK rap, great lyrics and emotion. Get yourself a decent mic / mixer when you can. You have got a talent there. I could imagine hearing that track on the radio with a good production. Keep it up. Its difficult being the song writer and producer, not to mention the vocalist!(I can't rap)
Aside from the quality of the vocal recording I think this sounds good. The muzic sounds ok, but I'm not into the technical end of that. The singing part/hook is a bit too far away would be the real critique here. Aside from all that I can feel your emotion. Good job.
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Good job.
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