It has some nice parts, but there are to many changes and it somehow does not flow nicely, base is to loud in some parts. I like your idea about asian team but since this is your first song here i am shure you will get bether. I am shure of that, try to imagine what you want from a song would you listen it in the club. Idk but i would shure like to hear this song again if you planing more work on it peace
on FadingSakura by djpandurz88