Right! U have to search your line in this track, our melodys are switches to often and u´ll never find a clear line. Also let the cracks / breaks, try to make soften crossings. Basically its not bad u´re sounds...
Ok so the biggest thing i can fault is the bassline...just its too stabby. In a trance song the bass needs to flow with the groove...what I would do would be to listen to some pro songs but only listen closely to the basslines.......
Then when you done that listen to the synth progressions...
That will help you a lot...All in all the mix is pretty tight. Just a little muddy but your eq'ing will improve with the more tracks you produce so just keep at it....
yea i was was already planing on switching the bass...as for the synth... i knew it sounded weird so yea ill fix that as soon as i get some free time....ty for telling the faults
if you keep going this way, and just make it a little more psyche-playful with some human elements like breath and girls gasping in pleasure or pain or ... oh i get it the music is doing that to her. that kind of stuff....
or just keep goin this way, cuz it sounds cool and very modern. good stuff.
not sure, but it sounds like you are using loops. the track begins too suddenly, better build it up slowly. even though the track lasts only 2 minutes, it's getting a little boring at the end, cause everything just repeats. add more tension by changing the lead melody just a little, use filters to vary the sound. use more elements in the drum section, crashes, cymbals, snare rolls are always fine to combine different parts. maybe listen to some tracks, you like, and try to reproduce them, this could help a lot. or open some sample tracks in your daw and study the arrangement. the melody and sounds you are using are fine, only a straight line is lacking in your track. hope i could give some hints ;-)
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still fkn hot.
30 - fk.
love where it's going. you do really good.
instead of the 2nd synth, i'd do same melody but a bass.
cheers!
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Ok so the biggest thing i can fault is the bassline...just its too stabby. In a trance song the bass needs to flow with the groove...what I would do would be to listen to some pro songs but only listen closely to the basslines.......
Then when you done that listen to the synth progressions...
That will help you a lot...All in all the mix is pretty tight. Just a little muddy but your eq'ing will improve with the more tracks you produce so just keep at it....
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if you keep going this way, and just make it a little more psyche-playful with some human elements like breath and girls gasping in pleasure or pain or ... oh i get it the music is doing that to her. that kind of stuff....
or just keep goin this way, cuz it sounds cool and very modern. good stuff.
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