Hi Acidizer,
I like what you have here. Good ideas.
I think you can still improve a couple of things.
My 2 cents:
- very good work on the guitar; in some points a bit "too quiet" in the mix
- good drum (programming?) works perfectly in this track
- lack of a "bass carpet" ... you need a bass guitar on this
- the voice is not merged well enough in the mix
Regarding the voice, I think you are very convincing on the "metal" parts, you deliver well on the "mid-hi" pitched part (~1:55) but your voice is not too convincing on the "low" parts (eg. the beginning).
My personal highlight is the ending refrain, with the metal and the high-voice duet: it is very good!
Looking forward to hear a reworked version of this song: it could become a great track!
Ciao, Domenico
Made a track using this, it's called One More. Check it out, I hope you like it. I gave you credit in the description of course. Great instrumental man
The thing i like about this.... it breaks the boundaries of that normal hip-hop... the beat catches u off guard at first... then ur pulled in vibin... Good stufff dude
There's a raw sound behind this, it's a slight bit anthem like and some of it makes me think about a soildier march. Also a bit metal linked. I love your stop/start synth, the ending could maybe be prolonged a bit or made to fade out though..
What you have here is a damn good start of a track that could be great. More instrumentation to fill it out and the excision of a few bits would really make this baby.
If you want, contact me through my contact page and we can collab on making this baby kick.
too bad you dont care for it. everyone has to start somewhere man, it was only like the second or third song i made. yes it does have mostly original sounds that came with the programs initial pack, because my loop library was not built up yet. fortunately though i made something pretty catchy out of it. just because someone uses the base stuff doesnt mean it isnt good music, i have seen plenty of people up hear do similar things
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I like the concept and the basslines. Congrats on being the oldest Rock track on this site.
Evan
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I like what you have here. Good ideas.
I think you can still improve a couple of things.
My 2 cents:
- very good work on the guitar; in some points a bit "too quiet" in the mix
- good drum (programming?) works perfectly in this track
- lack of a "bass carpet" ... you need a bass guitar on this
- the voice is not merged well enough in the mix
Regarding the voice, I think you are very convincing on the "metal" parts, you deliver well on the "mid-hi" pitched part (~1:55) but your voice is not too convincing on the "low" parts (eg. the beginning).
My personal highlight is the ending refrain, with the metal and the high-voice duet: it is very good!
Looking forward to hear a reworked version of this song: it could become a great track!
Ciao, Domenico
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Keep them coming :-)
john
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John
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If you want, contact me through my contact page and we can collab on making this baby kick.
John
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anyways, thats for your input.