LeadByExample

I agree totally with JohnBoutilier, for your first track is absolutly great. I will be looking forward to see what you can do when you have learned stuff.
I remember my first track. Just sounded like someone threw an oildrum at a wall, whilst trying to use a chainsaw to catch it mid air. (Still sounds like that :P)

Keep it up, im curious to what height your potential takes you.

sounds great so far, my friend, I look forward to its completion :-)

All The Best

John

Great kicking bass, nice listening to. I did find there wasn't much beat but the synth that was very imposing almost erased that effect.
If anything it's a bit short but I suppose if it's just a little remix that doesn't matter much.

Its a very sweet track anyways, but in light of the fact that its your first track ever, all I have to say is Wow.

I very much look forward to hearing what you're going to be doing in the future.

All The Best

John

Totally enjoyed the piece, my friend, great work.

All The Best

John

Hey there, nice intro, i absolutely loved the piano, very chilly =)
Though i must say that (besides there being a lot to do on this track) i don't like that synth you use =S, it just doesn't fit the song... Try working out with some bass first, and then tray using or creating a warmer sounding synth, not so cold and rough like the one you're using. Just some ideas ;)

Leo

wow love the calm piano very sweet nice pro sounding kick maybe the drone doesnt fit to the piano donno
keep it up!
ioka flow