The beat is ok but you should work on the vocal's a bit more. The vocal's are overpowering the track on some parts of the track. But "WE" can only get better with time so "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
Whatsup man. Welcome to the loop. You made this beat? I dig it man, simple but bangs. Your voice has a grip of potential man. your raps are a bit in the growing stages Im guessin? You def have that south style down, but i think your delivery is def going to improve as you move on.
Third verse is my favorite of the 3, You came across clean in that one. Thats the kind of delivery Im talkin.
The last part, cut like one or two f those reps of the hook fam. Gets a bit too repetitive there feel me?
Good work man, biggest tip from me for the loop. Give reviews then you get em. Just remember the more interesting the rev you give the more youll get back. i can be an exception haha.
Peace
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on Introducing by Frankdidae
Third verse is my favorite of the 3, You came across clean in that one. Thats the kind of delivery Im talkin.
The last part, cut like one or two f those reps of the hook fam. Gets a bit too repetitive there feel me?
Good work man, biggest tip from me for the loop. Give reviews then you get em. Just remember the more interesting the rev you give the more youll get back. i can be an exception haha.
Peace