Hey bro I really like the direction you were going with this...kind of a rock/hip-hopish track. This is actually pretty good for your first track ever. The next step is to add some new instruments and maybe add some percussion to liven up the drums a bit more. If you need any more help just let me know.
thx bro the thing is i don't have much to work wit lik i don't have alot of kicks and drums to use. i only have a demo of fruity loop so it's kinda hard but i try.
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