hello Altin! this tune is like watching a great character actor do a scene. there’s a lot of nuance and mystery about this character— something to be revealed. i love the clacky hats, they make me think of barton fink’s typewriter. i’m really digging it, man, much respect!
Get rid of those hi hats or change the pattern to distracting to a great song man! the piano got to go it's notes are clashing with alot for the song. Hit me up on instagram if you want help find a great melody man! otherwise I suggest (F# F D# A# G#) in that order as the lead- @michaaelmayomusic
Alright thanks for the support i will update this i realised an hour ago when i listened it in some good headphones an hour ago and it sounded totally different
I feel like the main melody could be more dominant in the mix. Not saying it has to be a sample, but something more recognizable that captures the listener. Not bad though, keep creating.
oh thank you well it kind of depends on what you listen it to because it can sound very different when listened on laptop speakers headphones car audio etc.. i will keep going thank you for the visit ;p
Hey Altin, This melodie has some interesting elements to it. I dig it. It has a good and positive vibe to it. Sometimes simplicity is key. And this is one of those tracks. One word of advise though, i would put in some extra elements to it so it would sounds a lil bit more varied. Also the melodie is a bit on the short side for my taste. But none the less, still a nice melodie to listen to. Keep on creating and listening. And have a good one. Verdi
I like what I'm hearing Altin, it would be excellent to hear a vocalist on here. There's are piano notes that are off more towards the end, but overall i think it's a wonderfully catchy track. Thanks for sharing with the community.
Thank you so much for your feedback, I'm very glad that you like it and im very aware of the piano notes in the end i will update it hopefully with some vocals if someone wants to add them
very very good friend! very rhythmic, the guitar notes are excellent, but maybe you have a piano note that shouldn't be there in a chord ... still a very good job!
Michel
I appreciate those words my friend it's true that you got a point there it might just sound better without that piano you are talking about totally agree with you i might update it in the begining it felt like empty then i added that hoping with vocals it would change the way it sounds but again im a newbie and this was very helpful for future tracks and attempts thank you!
Thank you very much! It's true that the the start is hard but after i posted some few tracks people here in this site kept teling to go on and gave me feedback to improve
veery cool progressive chill out ... like the build-up and the fade out ... guitar is awesome ... and yes, it desperatelly needs vocs ... hope you find someone ...
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I like the smooth romantic vibe you got going on. Some LL Cool J level type of stuff right here!
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This is a hit bro, you almost got it right tbis sketchjust needs some more polishing.
Also maybe put some modern drum patterns under it.. play with different genre soundkits.
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