thanks John, Im glad you liked it, I was insecure, that ppl might not ike it becasue, Ive done a pretty rough version of instrumentalls, distortion and all. but that what I was feeling, plus Im not a pro producer. Ill sing something on your track once I get a chance, pretty busy right now, but will get to it as soon as I can.
A pretty decent track, the vocals sit in the track kind of weird, the background vocals need to be panned to one side or something. Maybe even a little eq might help the vocals sit better as well, just a thought, mixing is tough especially if you don't have great gear. Keep it up, your on the right track.
THis was simply fantastic. I have to agree with Slap about the attitude here. Vocals, as has been typical, are incredible. The backing track was also very good.
Thorougly enjoyed your track.. Wonderful vocals. If you ever need any help mixing I or many of the pweople here on the loop would be more than happy to off assistance.
Whats up J.the track is hot and you have a vibe going on. i like the track but i didn't hear any separation in the vocals or the instrumentation.try busting the backround vocals wide. mabe some panning effects on some of the instruments,this might make it a stronger track. just my opinion.PEACE. THE MACK MAN OUT.
Loving the attitude and originality. Great lyrics by the way and your delivery hooks the listener right in. You obviously have plenty of ideas lyrically and melodically which is a gift. Keep creating!!!
A smokey little cabaret somewhere in Europe in the 20-30's. A chantuese sings a little song. A small band backs her up. I'd drop the duel voice interlude at 3 min or so. The song is good as it is. Nice Jolita. :)
Cheers,
-Koble
Wow, i like you voice is very very great.
you need a new sound of instrument but you vocal is cool.
i mean that, do the new sound and then you can sell this track.
a really cool track loved the beat and the music, the vocals where sort all over the place. i think a little less vocals has a FX and just sing you have great voice have. wow! i could do some much with this song, we should work together some time ...
Hi Jolita! Very Nice work you have here. It has huge potential. I love the vibe and your theme. Your voice is exciting, sexy and yet very innocent. I enjoyed the way you tell the listener to take off "Ur Mask". I would love to collab with you on this.
-Styles
i like the mood of this song
can u make an acapella of this song
those high notes need a bit of work but its no biggie
its the tempo and the mood that interests me
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Personal jesus.
Pretty sick stuff!!
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No electric guitars? Weird... (just kidding, guitar nuts...)
Jeff
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All The Best
John
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John
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Keep them coming
John
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I like that.
I can also understand what point ImproveWithError is trying to make. The vocals could be mixed a bit better (but yes that's difficult).
I only notice that in the chorus though. The verses are mixed just fine I'd say...
keep it up :)
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I just think the beat needs a little more so it can live up to your voice..
It lacks cymbals and bass if you ask me...
But the vocals are truly amazing!
Imma check out some more of your stuff right now ;)
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cheers
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cheers
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John
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Definitely a fav
John
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John
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i just was a better mixer.. will try panning.
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LOve the track. Your vocals are wonderful. Great voice.
Faved
John
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Cheers, Slap...
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i saw ur FB link and added you...
maybe we could collab sometime
nevertheless, this piece is just amazing!
hope all is well!
d-_-b
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Cheers,
-Koble
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you need a new sound of instrument but you vocal is cool.
i mean that, do the new sound and then you can sell this track.
waiting to hear the final version
Inspire_Nung
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-Styles
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OH SH!!! Love the way you are singing.
Wow. I want to do something with this!
I'm letting you know.
can i can i can i
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Is it me, or it reminds me of the Rolling Stones?
Congratulations!!!
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can u make an acapella of this song
those high notes need a bit of work but its no biggie
its the tempo and the mood that interests me