ecityfinnest

keep up the good work lil bro(CQ) YOU ARE GROWING. ALWAYS STRIVE FOR MORE.

K2F.... OUT

Real nice track..What mic are you using? you need a bit of eq on the vocals, maybe compress them a bit so they dont peak so much, just a nicer mix on the vocals would really bump this track up a lot..I used to have the same problem, i wanted my vocals to be loud so i would make them peak all over the place, but with time and experience i learned about compression, eq, reverb and a bit of mixing makes the whole track sound way better...Just my 2 cents on this and the track is still real good...

you can sing man. this is great. i like this one a lot. i like that you dont curse, that's sooo admirable. youre great. your voice is great... maybe do some more sing and rap mixture? the "i can hear your soul sing" part, is really good.I like it a lot.

Your voice is great, I think that your mic is a bit off? a bit... scratchy? eh,
I love the instrumental and the "yea" after the yellow green red that the girl says, it's sweet.
Your rapping is great, I agree with the others that the beat got lost a little, but you kept it going and it turned out pretty sweet.
2face did a good job rapping too!I think that 2face has the 50 cent thing, with the overlapping voice. it's good. do more with effects I think... like, lil more overlapping, it'd be good. and a mic... that maybe captures your vocal depth? cus ive heard your other stuff and the vocals are more deep, whcih is reaaally great. :D
Keep it coming. ....looperman insisted I be constructive, so here we are. :)

Whats up man. Lyrics are really nice. I would have to say that your flow could be alittle tighter and def work some eq on that mic it sounds alittle flat. I really gotta give you proops for keepin it clean. I respect that even though I may not always follow it myself lol. Well done though man. Fix that mic and tighten your flow and you'll be hard to catch!

A great piece there but for the first half, you almost killed the rhythmic pattern. A little bit of mixing too would make that track better. Keep going !!!! You willa make it fissure !!!

gd track fam i like ur style

Pretty sweet man!
Good lyrics man, maybe work on your mix a bit. Maybe its just the mic

Keep Em Coming!

Cheers
Kenny Lee

Sounds great, my friend, keep them coming.

John

yeah i lik dis ur gd well done

This is fantastic. You have a great voice for rap, my friend, but me thinks you can probably sing as well.

Keep them coming

John

Tight beat..lyrics go in deep... at time it seems like you might have lost the beat a bit but while putting the verse down, it still came in dope though...track is tight!

I like the vocals and the way you rap with this beat. The piano is very repetitive for me, and too loud, anyway is a good track

I like the track, especialy the singing part and the vocal efects

hey this is beautiful. I am a piano freak, i try to use it in most my tracks. This is like spoken word poetry and its very sweet and emotional. I can tell ya really use ur heart. Great wrk. :)

I like this, the vocals seem like they can flow a lil better together, and turned down a lil :) But overall nice work aye !
cheers

Hey I am really diggin this beat. This track has a very chill out vibe. The flow is pretty tight, its nice to hear rap without a bunch of cursing. Thats art to me. Ha ha it seems most people who rap cant find that last word for their lyrics so they just say *****

sounds nice. that piano nasty!!!. keep it up fam

Dope track fam,you did your thang.The new mixtape is gonna be crazy.

This Is One Of Your Best To Date CQ!! Keep Up The GREAT WORK!!

its good the chorus sound a lil off tho but i like the flow remind me of lupe fiasco

dope man!!diggn the track!!flow is tight!!word up!!keep doin whatcha do maaaaane!!

At 1st i thought the track would be lame cause of the title the production was hot the 1st and 2nd wasn't that got 3rd i like the the use of the adlips and like flow was smooth
Much love keep working

its cool man i think the vocals could be a lil smoother tho good job

Well, this is pretty good. But i agree, the lyrics weren't too great, but i did like how you harmonized the words. Most people just forget about doing that. it was decent.