Nice track mate, very sweet pad, good build up for this one, with another beat, would make a good techno or trance piece, all the elements are there for it, I know what Spiv means about the vocal take control, I have a couple versions of it myself, for someone just starting out, you are doing your tunes extremely well, ones I have heard so far have been very good...Peace n Respect...Fav'd....Estefano...
This is very upbeat! It puts a smile on my face for sure! I know I've heard that "Take Control" sample somewhere before, but I can't place it. You've created some awesome melodies on this track! Really nice work!
Dude this nice and grimy, the snares are kind of odd breaking into the loud party synths..to tripleted(is that a word?) to me, but then it gets sick. I dig the cuts in the synth, and the bell type synth work is clean and makes it interesting.
This really moves, but the tripleted(Im sticking with it) snares are just off to me. I feel like if I was dancing theyd kind of weird me out.
Ending was too quick, fade it out a bit longer maybe? solo the synth? just suggestions.
Great work man. I dig it.
ye i know what u mean with the ending could, add another synth loop and fade it all the way out, see where that takes me. and about the snares ill look into it i think the first snare is ok, but the second one bursting into the synth could maybe change cause u would expect to get some phat bass after that snare, but u get a synth melody instead. i understand the criticism tyvm for that this stuff helps people get better.
Nice track, nice build up, liking the beat, good choice of synths, arrangement and clarity very good, mate well done on your first tune, great work, adding to fav's...Peace and respect...So pleased to be able to give you your first review and fav....Estefano....
on R13 - take control by roel13
Nice track mate, very sweet pad, good build up for this one, with another beat, would make a good techno or trance piece, all the elements are there for it, I know what Spiv means about the vocal take control, I have a couple versions of it myself, for someone just starting out, you are doing your tunes extremely well, ones I have heard so far have been very good...Peace n Respect...Fav'd....Estefano...
on HARD (style meets core) by roel13
on R13 - take control by roel13
on R13 - take control by roel13
on r13 - spacerave by roel13
on HARD (style meets core) by roel13
This really moves, but the tripleted(Im sticking with it) snares are just off to me. I feel like if I was dancing theyd kind of weird me out.
Ending was too quick, fade it out a bit longer maybe? solo the synth? just suggestions.
Great work man. I dig it.
on HARD (style meets core) by roel13
Faved^^
on r13 - spacerave by roel13
Liked it just listen more carefully the hardcore songs of other artists.
on r13 - spacerave by roel13
Nice track, nice build up, liking the beat, good choice of synths, arrangement and clarity very good, mate well done on your first tune, great work, adding to fav's...Peace and respect...So pleased to be able to give you your first review and fav....Estefano....