this is a very cool sounding soft rock song alá REO Speedwagon or so ... mix is crystal clear ... desperately needs a vocalist, for sure ... did you see that acapella section here? perhaps, there is someone ...
though, I think you should get some variation in the building cause it's a tad bit monotonous after the second minute ... donno, another instrument, a chorus for the peak of the song, mood change ... just sayin of couse ...
all in all, huge congrats with my handshake, Danke
Thank you so much! I think youre absolutely right, and id love any takes on where it could go. I have numerous tracks that i can upload, so ill be putting them up asap.Thanks again my friend!
on The Red Inside by johnlisa
though, I think you should get some variation in the building cause it's a tad bit monotonous after the second minute ... donno, another instrument, a chorus for the peak of the song, mood change ... just sayin of couse ...
all in all, huge congrats with my handshake, Danke