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Yo yo !

Very catchy track , love the baseline
also the vocals .
Nice melody with the synts.
Good work !!
Greetz !

That electro saw lead is amazing, is it Nexus? It sounds familiar... good work, love the vibes!

Hello BF,
This is a great track mate.
I really love the evolution and the quality of the mix, very clear
The vocal fit right in.

Well done.
Jamid

Hey :)

Great track! wanted to dance :)

great work!

cheers Kaz..

Wow it is a great track my friend.
Really well done.
Fave's
Jamid

wow it's full of energy! as said Dan, efficient track for a party! you said it's in progress, i'm dying to listen to the final version!

Congrats
bleep

definitely DJ fodder for the party. all the parts are crystal clear and can't deny the beat. Nice work.

Hey Beatz this is thumpin right from the start very cool and nice structure and links the whole thing is PUMPING super nice regards Robbie.

they removed the vocals, mind to send it to me ?

Sure does have those Electro vibes! Good work.

Great Autotune balance, not too robotic, but perfectly melodic. And the harmonizing is hella rad!

Good mix. Super clean

This is really well put together.
I have no advice or criticism to give.
Sounds spot on.

The song sounds great! There are only a few pointers I'd like to add regarding the transition sounds.

At 0:22 you have the reverse crash to build tension which is great. Then the white noise downlift resolves it at 0:24, but that seems to come out of nowhere. If you reversed the white noise and made it a riser, then it would bridge the gap so it doesn't feel like it comes out of nowhere. Same thing happens at 1:12 and a few other times in the song.

I would fix just that and it would sound perfect. Great work here.

-Sheen

I'd hold up on trying to sell this anywhere, since the song itself was
already released in France:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZT1pVsFPRM0

Maybe if you contact the singer or his management company, letting them
know you've done a re-mix you can work out something. Otherwise this may
just be in your music portfolio as a non-commercial work, since even
acapellas are the property of the artist (per looperman rules).

https://www.songtradr.com/user is where people and organisations are looking to purchase music for pop film games ads and so on.
Just had another listen to this and it's near perfect.

the instrumental: nothing to say, it's perfect with a nice beat, really hypnotic
the vocal part: i'm less fan with their presence during all the track.

nice work
bleep

Well this isn't bad overall. Louder kicks pls. Levels are a bit off for sure. You should sidechain everything. /sarcasm. Overall this has a lot of potential. It just needs more work

I think you should seriously be looking at this place ..... https://www.songtradr.com/user

Extremely well done!
My only complaint so far ... I'm going in for a second listen in a moment ... is the synth that comes in as a perfectly nice surprise at 0.56 goes out again at 1.12 in a not quite right way. Leaves me hanging.
It goes out at the wrong point or too quickly or both.
I think I would have faded that out and maybe even experiment with it still having a quiet but still fading presence beyond the 1.12 mark now far behind the vocal.
Had a second sitting and wow.
This is very well done.
Love the ending.
For the life of me I can't get vocals samples in anything I do.
I've tried and tried but nope.
But you have put the vocals in so well I'm inspired to try yet again.
You have given me ideas.
Watch this space.
Great work.

Vocals are great, but you need to work on sound quality now. Get track levels equal, example. Ride is totally killing kick, overall kick is a bit weak.

Here are keywords:
Sidechaining
Compression
EQuing
If you look those up, they will help you. :)

Great vocals, however, you could do a lot more with this. You should really dig deeper. Keep it up!

great vocals! i think everyone has stated that haha but I'm liking the track as a whole feels good for commercial. i would probably hear this on the radio... since its a work in progress i will love to hear the final version. :)

Great track here. Those vocals are great, very strong vibe they give off. The instrumental you created around the vocals fits nice and takes the track to a unique I wouldn't normally expect for these type of vocals, but it works.

Good work here mate!

wow that's really good track, i love the vibes