BeatzFactory

Extremely well done!
My only complaint so far ... I'm going in for a second listen in a moment ... is the synth that comes in as a perfectly nice surprise at 0.56 goes out again at 1.12 in a not quite right way. Leaves me hanging.
It goes out at the wrong point or too quickly or both.
I think I would have faded that out and maybe even experiment with it still having a quiet but still fading presence beyond the 1.12 mark now far behind the vocal.
Had a second sitting and wow.
This is very well done.
Love the ending.
For the life of me I can't get vocals samples in anything I do.
I've tried and tried but nope.
But you have put the vocals in so well I'm inspired to try yet again.
You have given me ideas.
Watch this space.
Great work.

Vocals are great, but you need to work on sound quality now. Get track levels equal, example. Ride is totally killing kick, overall kick is a bit weak.

Here are keywords:
Sidechaining
Compression
EQuing
If you look those up, they will help you. :)

Great vocals, however, you could do a lot more with this. You should really dig deeper. Keep it up!

great vocals! i think everyone has stated that haha but I'm liking the track as a whole feels good for commercial. i would probably hear this on the radio... since its a work in progress i will love to hear the final version. :)

Great track here. Those vocals are great, very strong vibe they give off. The instrumental you created around the vocals fits nice and takes the track to a unique I wouldn't normally expect for these type of vocals, but it works.

Good work here mate!

wow that's really good track, i love the vibes

Great track mate I love it and vocals too :)

Steve

Those vocals are really good! Interesting track overall, but I would personally vary the bass melodically. Maybe experiment a bit with it? :)
Also, the BPM could be a bit higher. But, man, those vocals are perfect. Don't change anything about those! Good luck with your track!

where the vocals from, looperman ?

amazing, powerful. I love this! amazing vocals. got a fav. awesome work.

Radio friendly sound, nice vocals.

nice vocals. Check out my track called black snow i think you will like it.

nice track

this song is dope

Sweet banging track! Keep up the work!

It's really chill for an electro beat... which ROCKS!!! SO nice and easy flowing... it's got great potential! Can't wait to hear it when it's done!

very punchy kicks at the start, i like it
the vocals fit well, it has that "gorillaz" or "2D" feel

doesn't feel like it's in progress at the start tho, its already amazing xD

cheers!

nice sounds man

It seems you definitely have the idea there, I think really just filling in the open space would really bring it together. I'd probably recommend having a sub bass under your drums and then side chaining it to your kick. Always a necessity for house music. overall, really cool track!

Hi Beatzfactory,

You killed it.
I luv, luv luv how well the bassline, the beat and the vocal samples work with each other. This is an excellent example of the beauty of simplicity (but really, it's not that simple, otherwise everyone could do it). Kinda rough at 1:09 with the drop out, but you've stated that this is a work in progress and with everything up to that point gelling so well, this is a winner. I second Xmachine's wish to hear the final result.
Just in time for summer, this is definitely a party song!

Beatzfactory i love the super back beat and funky sound great mixing too looking forward to hearing the finished article great work. regards.

this minimalistic approach is really interesting

nice work

Bleep

Collab ? hit me up on soundcloud; lordkaff looking for different producers for the album im working on

Hello BF,
I think you've done a wonderful job here.
I absolutely love the way you went with it.
Well done.
Fav's
Jamid

a really nice track , a cool one .
I loved singer's voice too .
good job .