I really love the percussion foundation, the piano and electronics can come in with a bit more variation to break it up a bit. I really enjoyed the piece, but feel it did get repetitive pretty quick. I have to repeat how much I love the percussion though, throw in a little more variable and this has got some major potential!
Jim
thanks for the reply. it took quite a while to get the percussion sounding decent, definitely a new experience. totally agree on the repetition, just havent put any more work into it. CF
An excellent concept, which I am quite a fan. Still, the theme is a bit too repetitive and lacking in variation. I honestly think it's a good base that you need to evolve.
A good and quality hearing, despite the significant compression.
Very nice attempt for a firsttimer. I realy liked what i heard. I have only one comment :) and that's the little bit annoying rumble in the backgroud i gues that must be timpani's. Maybe you should work on this a bit. However GREAT STUFF!
And if you like classical music (for inspiration) check out one of my own attempts "Adagio in G by T. Albinoni" here on looperman.
definitely agree now on the timpani. i think it sounded better while i was making it but the drums really need to be clearer. im checking your piece right now. thanks for the listen and the reply
errghhh, hard hittin track with sick snyths....love it...I agree with TCAS that vocal could of been better but put that aside this track is ill man....keep it coming
Cool beats!
The vox is a little behind in volume...
did you tried to find some pellas on Looperman?
There are so many pella's that can rise your track...
the track is amazing, vocals brought me into the mix and then i was hooked when the beat dropped. need to master though, turn some ish up drums for sure. good ups
I like the lil high piched synth riff... reminds me of some other song. Ha ha if you use fl studio... you can msg me and send me the .flp file and I could monkey with it some just to see what comes out if ya want to ha ha peace.
What's up man, I like it!!!! Great use of the loops. Did much more than I ever could. Real fresh and relaxing feel. A serious moment. Great work!!!! Had to download this for sure. My new fav. Keep on doing your thing man, Wish you the best in your future. You're onto something really good here. Have a good one. Peace!
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Jim
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A good and quality hearing, despite the significant compression.
Dan
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New track of my ep
Peace
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i like the song .. good work ,,
on Peaks by CFactor
Very nice attempt for a firsttimer. I realy liked what i heard. I have only one comment :) and that's the little bit annoying rumble in the backgroud i gues that must be timpani's. Maybe you should work on this a bit. However GREAT STUFF!
And if you like classical music (for inspiration) check out one of my own attempts "Adagio in G by T. Albinoni" here on looperman.
Greetz,
Djinn XS
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The vox is a little behind in volume...
did you tried to find some pellas on Looperman?
There are so many pella's that can rise your track...
TCAS
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nice lead melody
keep it up
peace
KingPasyBeatz
on Tippy by CFactor
dope fuckin' track!
luv all tha melodies especially
that lead whistle...
tha mixing could be a tad bit better
but you've got tha beat-work
DOWN PAT!
keep it up!
ahahahaha
Peace from LA
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Keep it up!
Zatch
on Split by CFactor
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got them drums banging...
awesome lil' choir...
BANGIN'
good shizz~~
Peace from LA