You have a decent track here. I think you did a good job at making all of the sounds work together. And you incorporated the acapella in very smoothly. With that being said, I think some things can be altered to make this track even better. The mix of this is extremely loud. I had my volume at 48% and still had to turn it down because my headphones were literally shaking. I would suggest lowering the DB sound levels just a bit.
Over time the track became a bit repetitive. I was expecting to hear a bridge, a drop, and some more variation in the instrumental but was fairly disappointed when it just cut off for a few seconds and repeated what I just heard. I think if you worked more on this, you could have a really great track on your hands. You most certainly have a well-grounded foundation for what could be a mainstream radio-played track. You just need to work out the kinks and fix some things. All in all, good work sir.
on TINDERGARDEN - Without You - Bass Boosted by TINDERGARDEN
on TINDERGARDEN - Without You - Bass Boosted by TINDERGARDEN
on TINDERGARDEN - Without You - Bass Boosted by TINDERGARDEN
on TINDERGARDEN - Without You - Bass Boosted by TINDERGARDEN
Over time the track became a bit repetitive. I was expecting to hear a bridge, a drop, and some more variation in the instrumental but was fairly disappointed when it just cut off for a few seconds and repeated what I just heard. I think if you worked more on this, you could have a really great track on your hands. You most certainly have a well-grounded foundation for what could be a mainstream radio-played track. You just need to work out the kinks and fix some things. All in all, good work sir.