Funwrd1

oh fuck dude!!!!!I think U should buy some ears!!!!

Great job man.
Currently I have a real sore throat ('tis the season) but if you give me time, I can take a stab at the voxx for you. Let me know.
Mark.

So cool!

Very much serene, I think I almost fell asleep I was so relaxed. Thanks for the download too, so I can use this in the future! Nice work.

cool mam... i can digg it

It sounds bubbly. The music can definitely be for a female. That sample is cool, what if you played with it a bit. That synth line sounds big band almost. That change up after 2:00 does wonders. Tight work, only 1 way but up!

Crazy beat. Might want to turn the vocals down a few decibles.

Great use of the pella, my friend, thought about using that one myself.

Keep them coming

John

Track is really good, but the vocals need to come more forward.

Keep them coming, My Friend

John

as the verse dropped i heard some scratchy sounds like something was turned up too loud. I liked the lyrics how they dropped though. good beat man.

Wonderful track, my friend, very much enjoyed :-)

Keep em coming

John

I'm really thrilled about what u were able to do with this one. i just couldnt shake that Nirvana band feel to the beat though, it almost had me thinking about the "Tenn Spirit" track

Ray does some wicked vocals, doesn't he? Have you thought about chopping the vocals up? Great backing track.

ALl The Best

John

Loud and proud. Nicely done, but you almost deafened me when it started, lol

John

Incredible! I've been brought back to my 70's parties. You were there too? ;)
Excellent. I put it in my fav

To be honest, it's kind of all over the place. If you edit some parts, I can see the potential.

I'm not sure I'd categorize this as being Indie. I think it's good for the most part but some of the background sounds pull away from it. That's just my opinion. I didn't really like that initial loop... Asian Harp??... Maybe you could tone it down. I think it'll be better that way. That loop was too much of a distraction for me. - Adaora

ah this is a cool track love the highs you can hear them really well in a car or home stereo all you need is some bass and claps great work though keep it up

i really liked it as well the only idea i had is to tais e the voals a bit more

i like it make more like this

thats pretty cool, I like it! im only hearing the highs though. maybe put in some bass or low kicks to add more flavor and depth to it

Nice Beat. Sounds like Tim Westwood rappin lol.

Haha i wouldve put it under the Wierd genre, but its pretty epic. I really liked it man, very unique and trippy, though sometimes it could sound a tad muddled with sounds. But the lyrics were implemented very well. Keep up the good work. -Gabe

Peace Love Jesus!

Like that a lot. Very catchy riff. You could do a guitar solo without the rap somewhere in there. Either way I would be proud of that track.
Also, re Sireone`s `Reality Checks,` he wrote that he had made the rap with 2 different b.p.m.`s by mistake i.e. 96 for a couple of bars then 94 for the next. I managed to slip a minute or so of it into my mix but it strays from the beat a bit. Maybe he will re re-record it. Cheers

Real nice at times it sounds a bit distorted but its just because there is alot going on through out the whole track which keeps u busy listening...

I like this a lot. The only thing is that the piano in the middle should sound like a REAl grand piano, but it sounds like a synth. it does not sound dark enough. it also doesnt stay in key the whole time. like the flow, drums could be more prevalent as well. Some of the hits around 3:30 sound a bit cheesey to me. NICELY DONE!!!