Try turning down the volume of your vox. and maybe slow down the tempo of the techno before you try and spit over it unless you can truly spit fast. Or just find a more fitting beat. Nice job tho, I can't hate a man for trying to rap and put his feelings in a rap. Kepp it up and keep learning and improving
Has a 1960's feel to it for the first part. Which is meant as a compliment. Like your lyrics. As the above review says "Loads of potential" with this track.
Gord
This song has a lot of potential in my opinion. Guitar and singing are great. Reminds me of bands like Modest Mouse or Sunny Day Real Estate. I love that kind of music. Keep on doing your thing.
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