Checkin out more of your tracks and this one really struck me as interesting. Like the marimbas a lot. and there's a part with the strings where it ends on this slightly off pitch... in a good way. I almost feel like it's some dark eerie carnival ride where the power is getting shot off and everything is slowing to a stop... cool mental imagery for sure.
I agree that the kick could use a little more "oomph" overall the drums sound a little like they're being covered by a pillow or something. Pulling in a little more highs from em, or just a light touch of a snappier snare would do wonders. A fill or two wouldn't hurt either.
Overall great track though, I hope you don't take my criticism as "this sucks" or "you suck" you've got a very good ear and that's clear to see.
Yo solid beaet and track, but the vocals need some work... not so much the flow but the mastering. It sounds like it's popping, like he's too close to the mic or something. Honestly, I'm still learning the ropes of mastering myself, so I can't tell you HOW to fix it, I'm pretty sure it can be fixed fairly easily though, and with some searcing I think you'd find some helpful threads here on looperman about mixing vocals. Other than that this is tight as hell. Love the piano work. Keep puttin em out!
daMN..Damn! bro, this is hot man...I love how it sounds...It sounds soo old school to me....I love it! I would like to record my lyrics on it, if you allow...My opinion...I have to tell you what I dont really like in the inst...I dont really like the audience and the vocals at the start and at 1:05-1:25..You could also add some more old school-hard drums as Mvpdj said...The vibe is PERFECT!..I am up for some collab if you want...:)
So, I would like to ask you, if you would like to sent me this instrumental without those vocals and without the drums maybe, if you can...I will be really gratefull if you do so..I would like to pay for it..but now I dont have some $:S
If you can, sent it to tha_soldier@hotmail.com ...
Peace bro!
Aite I appreciate it man! I just got done with an edited version that sounds much better than this one, so I'll send you that one. it still has the audience in it & some vocals but it's not as loud and I changed the drums up a bit. I didn't take em out since I made the beat before you posted the review, but hopefully you'll like it anyway :)
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Just give some "movement" to those kicks. Take it as an advice, nothing bad.
Keep it up, fella.
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I agree that the kick could use a little more "oomph" overall the drums sound a little like they're being covered by a pillow or something. Pulling in a little more highs from em, or just a light touch of a snappier snare would do wonders. A fill or two wouldn't hurt either.
Overall great track though, I hope you don't take my criticism as "this sucks" or "you suck" you've got a very good ear and that's clear to see.
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10/10 man
doughi boi
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Very interesting !
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Nice
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So, I would like to ask you, if you would like to sent me this instrumental without those vocals and without the drums maybe, if you can...I will be really gratefull if you do so..I would like to pay for it..but now I dont have some $:S
If you can, sent it to tha_soldier@hotmail.com ...
Peace bro!
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beats on free beats and loops sight
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nice job
cheers