loved that you added more drums....however, still liked the 1st version keeping it strickly instrumental...great track this way. "I like" could be a track all it's own...
Ahhh... what a shame the track suddenly ends. Very well done! Reminds me to the good old freestyle days back in the 80s, Stevie B-style.
Would like to hear the full version.
greetz
I wish it were longer too but my talent is very limited. I can never seem to come up with a bridge. If you think you can make it better by all means take a shot.
I'm pretty much a one trick pony so I can expand on it but I need some to add to it. I need a bridge I guess. If you wanna mess with it that's cool I really would like to finish it. I made it in FL Studio 9.6 beta.
That's the first thing that I thought of when I clicked play. It's a nice little track, though I do have a few suggestions. I don't know if you were trying to just upload a small clip of what you were working on, but put a little more effort into it before uploading it, you'll get MUCH more feedback from your listeners, and you'll feel a whole lot more accomplished too. As for the actual track itself, you have a good sound going, BUILD UPON IT! There's no reason to stop now, you've got the flow going!
And make sure you put VARIATION in it. There's nothing more substantial to a song than keeping your listeners interested.
Hi, I'm listening on my laptop and the mix feels a bit uneven, or unbalanced. There's something about the drums, I'm not sure. An other go in the mix might do the trick.
Having said that … I really like this song, the voice and the guitar solo is fierce. I think the chorus is great.
Keep it up.
/pmk
I agree completely with your observation. Thats me singing and I don't consider myself a singer. The drums are off I know. As far as the solo goes its Real Strat and Guitar Rig 2 and my Korg M3
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Would like to hear the full version.
greetz
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but cheers to adding your own twist
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thanks for sharing.
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That's the first thing that I thought of when I clicked play. It's a nice little track, though I do have a few suggestions. I don't know if you were trying to just upload a small clip of what you were working on, but put a little more effort into it before uploading it, you'll get MUCH more feedback from your listeners, and you'll feel a whole lot more accomplished too. As for the actual track itself, you have a good sound going, BUILD UPON IT! There's no reason to stop now, you've got the flow going!
And make sure you put VARIATION in it. There's nothing more substantial to a song than keeping your listeners interested.
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Having said that … I really like this song, the voice and the guitar solo is fierce. I think the chorus is great.
Keep it up.
/pmk
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