Djsovnlos

It has a terrific sound and rythym in my opinion, I love how the bass goes so well with the machine type sound. I agree with Eshar about the percussion. I imagine if you would put a basic kick, snare, hat drum loop on it, and perhaps just a little more distortion for some treble on the machine sound it would be perfect. It is very cool how it is though. I hope you find your sneaker ;)

Love the sound representing the bomb at the start, and then a very cool rhythm from 0:17 onwards. Personally I'd extend that section, keep adding stuff - heavy and distorted drums and synths - on top of that, before cutting to that break with the synth riff (0:46).

has real cool industrial sound to it, to me sounds like u have all the sounds meshed it into one big sound, maybe sort of layer the sounds in differnt ways. some times less is better

Sorry, my original review was a bit hasty. Giving this another listen now and it is seriously cool. It's like the music for a boss fight in a game, battling a huge mechanical beast.
I do think a few additional beat patterns and maybe some kind of riff would flesh it out a bit more, give it a bit more life.
Just some thoughts...

Again, very cool sounds going on here, I like the style but I feel it could be fleshed out into a complete track. It has a lot of potential. Hope to hear more from you soon.

Edit: Cool, keep at it dude, your production skills are decent. Practice = greatness!

Cool sounds. I can imagine this being developed into a more fully-fledged song. Keep it up dude.