It's good dude, the good thing is that it has words and it's well mixed, since it's 6 minutes long though, maybe around 3:30 you should have gotten crazy, something chaotic, a change-up or something, but that's my own personl taste, like the part at 5:45 but crazier, something to overload the brainwaves (like for example have you ever listened to the psytrance artist Gotalien? Or have a crazy part like hip-hop artists used to do with the turntables) , It's excellent though
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