this is a good start i like the bell. now id say the next thing is to work into that arpy synth sound you got going mess around with it a little. sounds like u put some effort into this and i cant wait to hear the fished results. if u decide you would like more help just hit me up im using fl 9 also.
this track definately has potential. if you are working with acid i cant really help you but you need alot of quantizing on this beeat. its missing some leads and like brokerscuthe said a piano in the background would give it some more texture. Do you play the piano/ because if you do you should do and the rest of the songs that i herd where you not samples then you should know how to harmonize sounds. forget the samples when it comes to beats use your gut instint if it doesnt sound right then chances are that it needs to be fix. dont give it you have alot potential just make sure you do your homework on the software your using k.
im pretty sure ima use this on my next track and if it were in my opinion you need a lil more bass it just works out that i can rhyme very quick to this so it turned out perfect but in the future if u do make some new stuff add a bit of bass
I dig that ghost synth and the bass goes hard. but it sounds sloppy at times. I know acid can be hard to work with though, im thinking that slide at the end cut end out with a single bass note hit to give it a bit more texture. Also some dark piano in the background would add a lot of atmosphere to it.
I can see this being a great track, keep at it.
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I'd keep the piano you have now, and copy it put some effects you like on it and layer it with the original. give it some more oomph. nice work though, your progression is just as uptempo
Really, really nice piano line and good strings to compliment it. Don't know about the massive synth-bass sound that comes in, but that's just me. Keep em coming.
EDIT: You should be a bit more descriptive when you post a track. If the piano belongs to Pianosounds, then you should write that. Otherwise you're taking credit for someone else's work. it's just how it works on here.
Real coo for your st try but try more transpose in the pitch maybe a pad or too and most important don't forget a break in the drums or adding a an additional drum panned to once side can spice things up a lil but nice for your st hope u get better
The piano and the beat sound nice together. That synth string is a little dark for the mood of the rest of the track in my opinion tho. But that's just me. If it were my track i'd keep everything and maybe change that string around. Keep them coming star.
its pretty good (my 1st attempt sounded a disaster lol)
here's my take: lower the level of the piano a little and boost the drums and bass because those and the vocals should be the prominent sounds in any hip hop track
creatively it would have been nice if you added a second melody/counterpoint or other instruments because it kind of does get a little repetitive
haa yeaa thanks i started recording the vocals to it yesterday with my friend, i still need to do my part, and when i was making it i didnt realize how long it would be i just kept doing the same thing but thanks
ok ok its a sad track not sad like bad but you would have to rap or sing about love or a friend but as far as the beat add some sound effects congos would sounds nice dont be afraid to play around with it but its good i like it
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I can see this being a great track, keep at it.
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here's my take: lower the level of the piano a little and boost the drums and bass because those and the vocals should be the prominent sounds in any hip hop track
creatively it would have been nice if you added a second melody/counterpoint or other instruments because it kind of does get a little repetitive
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