VERBALSKILLZ

This track needs more instruments for extra emotion in track, track is pretty much empty, do not get me wrong I like piano melody, but with a combination of other instruments, this track would be much better!but in any case, good job on this!

Alen

The music is nice and as well as the thought also. I think it might be more ambiance by the dint of a Piano tone....isn't that! Any way, I like it very much.... very nice job man!

Fantastic job! Keep it up...........

The few samples Magix (Voice and piano among others) are well used and well incorporated into this great song .... Really good.

Dan

Great lyrics, well spoken against a well conmposed backing track. What's not to like?

Keep them coming, my friend, enjoying your work

John

Another very nice spoken word my man. I really enjoy your work. Keep it coming.

I like it man. Very nice spoken word. Very cool feel.

very good realy liked it well done best wishes D:0)

Clever piece of work my friend. Superb words. I can imagine Johnny Cash doing this

This should be put under spoken word!
I really love this man

Good voice.

Keep Em Coming!

Cheers
Kenny Lee

Very nice voice and music matches the tempo. Would have been good if you had used a mix of spoken word and singing..Good work anyway.

First of all, thank you for your passage.
Then a good musical basis here, which would require to be again with additional instrumentation .... wonder sometimes, how a feeling, and this bring perception, at music ....

Dan

Very UNIKE ! HOPE YOU CAN FINISH THIS ONE, i say it need an ending i finished to ruff, thank you for sharing.

Hey its pretty good for a first! Ive used fl9 since Ive started, to now(a year or two) and you definatly got the basics better than I had them. Everything fits well together as far as the mood goes. I really like the panning work you did on the main synth, It fills the speakers. For the main synth, It feels maybe a bit too featured, try maybe taking it out for a few bars. For the chords, I usually like to outline them more,but thats just me. It helps sometimes to put in just a low, held note as the bass line for each different chord. Very unique style, and I did enjoy it!

Hi Man
Nice Arrangement you have make here . Good Job
cheers Zappo

very well done loved it :0) best wishes D.

Oh man! this is great stuff. You message is recieved. You are great. Keep coming the world is waiting. God bless

nice choice for your spoken word love the great sounds by (Minor2go a.k.a Pianosounds . Always bringing a story to life

u have a very strong voice for the ken words, u are lyrically talented and poetically gifted. nice panning to the Right the end of the track. cool effect.
ur words i believe to every girl would be heart-warming to them
much respect back at u for solid track. i enjoyed listening to it

DextDee

wow u really should narrate movies and things your voice is crazy but in a good way. Sometimes a lil creepy but its very unique

wow really this is a lil creepy to me. No offense its cool I work with a spoken word poet but this is just creepy

To you I come: this is what I got:
Sit down plz
I have something to do to you
I have a hunger for you
can fufill
The light from the sun
in your eyes
I love you
something very sweet
Get up my wife
Im free
I want you 2 be part of me
I want you alot

I guess some was right. Cool track u have a very cool voice

wow i feel like i am on a bad acid trip . Very interesting

Very interesting track. It's like Jim Morrison meets the Twilight Zone.

I like it

John

Wooooow.

Faved.

A quick production thought?
What do you use?
I particularly LIVE by noise gates, and I use them set at a low level setting so they cut out all breaths,...

Wow.
You are a poet.