Zoiielou

Not bad, you have a great voice. The beat and melody was great. I love RnB, with this song, it just increased it. Thanks. Nice job.

Keep it up, my friend.

Very nice track.I really love your voice and interpretation,I just thought it could be a little more forward in the mix but it's just my opinion
Nice work
Cheers
French Kid

wow this seems to be chill off the bat,
yes ...head noddingly awsomeness

you both deserve cookies....well at least i think so

love it every time im on i have to listen to this track can realy feel wat your saying ya voice has alot of life an is totaly unique. Beautiful

not bad, I like it. lyrics are a little confusing but good non the less.

i was wondering what id do for the stuff she gave me, now i think i know. thanks blume

Real nice beat going here! nice flow to the track! keep it up!
love the ending with the komodo guitar

peace

Bm;)

You go girl...LOL...when do we get started on the next one? I like it makes me wanna dance..LOL...has a happy sound to it.
Peace...Blume :)

nothing more really needs to be said so ill agree with all the below. especially the putting up an acapella would be great

I like your potential and would absolutely looove to get some acapellas from you. I have been looking on this site for a decent acapella for a while. You have the potential to be really good. I sent you my email address for the acapellas. Feel free to check out some of my music to see my styles. I have some much better music now but cant post them on this site. i would be willing to send you some samples.

Viz

I like this track, your voice is nice and kinda shy. But you seem to lack the confidence in this track, i am sure once you gain more belief in yourself, you would be a very good vocalist.

I can relate to your lyrics....

Hope i can work with you in the future.

Nice...

Peace...

Hello,
I agree with all of them. Your voice has a little gap , may be a quarter tone difference with the music line.
Try to correct it having a headphone to give you back the position of you voice regarding to the music. Your voice is not false (it doesn't exist), but not really in accord with the orchestra.
There are little exercices to modulate that, like yodling and others.
Good production.

Cool Zoiielou :) Your voice is very good but I have to agree with eshar and endtransmission, have more confidence in you and your voice, you have a beautiful voice, it's a bad thing if u loose it, take your best next time, don't be shy
Take care,
Florin

You need to have a little more confidence in your vocal delivery. The melodies are good enough to get radio play, in particular the chorus melody. But you won't get far singing it in such a lack luster way.

Don't be afraid, sing it properly. Unless it's a guide track for the melodies, in which case. Nice melodies!

Not bad, You definitely got potential. I like it. It kinda reminds me of 3rd bass. Poppy/RnB sound. Cool, I look forward to working with you. Blume :)