HatredIsMyHobby

This has some nice guitar riffs in it. Never really gets boring with the changes throughout. Very sincere lyrics and a lot of people prefer sincerity in lyrics.

Good solid progressions, plenty of space for a big vocal melody over the top. A couple of the loops aren't quite cut right/in time. But with some work, it's potentially a great track. Keep it up man.

i was digging the track, even for a metal those lyrics pretty out ther, sort like a love song i guesss

hey, I hear some of my loops!! great ...
it's a pretty weird track, not sure if it's intended, but it seems as you don't care at all about the different tempo of different loops ... at least it's pretty interesting this way ...
strange track ...

peace, rei

Like the effect you put on the vocal at points. Interesting stuff man, keep them coming.

Hey buddy to be severely honest i think you need to keep trying and work on making your songs. The structure isnt great and the drums turn on and off and change randomly, and its just hard to follow. I think with some improvement and practice you could make some kick a** songs man.

Peace Love Jesus!