monkwee

Woo hoo - very very nice work - and yes very mellow velvet underground like but that's a very good thing to be like. Really nice mix too with the guitar and bass and drums all so well placed and doing just the right thing - for sure it would be even better with a nice vox.
If you are looking for inspiration for a vox that might fit have you ever listened to the silver jews (I loved there album american water) or there main man David Berman died a year or two ago but his last album was pretty good too or check out the microphones (Phil Elvrum) in particular the album the glow pt2 - looking forward to your next one

wow bro ... what an awesome live sound here ... bit of the lofi side and it's cool too ... :-)
fistbump, Danke

Great song!

This is very good man, one of the better tracks on here. It reminds me of an artist I can’t quite put my finger on right now. All it needs is a vocal now.

I like it. Kinda reminds me of the Velvet Underground. Like Lou Reed's gonna start singing any second. I grew up on them so that's my reference point.

haha this is sterling, dude! the curli-q solo is just right, it was what i needed, my brother!

This track is dreamy! and easy on the ears, such a sweet track. GREAT! Work!

Perfect for my headspace at this point in time:) I'm hearing almost slacker style, almost country. Liked the discordant guitars at the min mark whether or not it was intentional. Needs a vocal...!

Nice work.

This got me a bit teary but in the best way

chill out

ah, man jazzy like and shot all to hell. ace ace ace!

now i know why people go snap. really ace, pal!

sounds like something that mac demarco would have put on the salad days demo album

U actually have some lyrics for this?

That opening riff with the melodic bass taking the lead is beautiful. As is the rest of it. Contemplative and super chill.

Bonito tema amigo, buena base musical para una voz, quedaría genial encima. Que tengas una buena noche. Paz y salud.

good track men

Very chill indeed. I like the vibe.

I most often start composing around some guitar chords that I like...so I am appreciating what you have going here...and kudos on the composition..good to hear a mix with the structure and key changes that have defined music for decades....well done man..keep it going...some melody lines or a vocal would bump it up even more...cheers...Ed

Good idea, good effort, no complaints, happy to hear real instruments playing a pop/rock idea. Now ya have to get the mic set up and lay down some vocals! ...maybe someday.

Wayne

Superbombastischextremphänomenal

nive job!!!!!

a good embodiment of a good idea)

Love the melody and mix sounds nice. Good job.