killahmonk

I can hear where you was going with this, but yea the loops are way out of tune with each other.

Track over-all sounds pretty good. the kicks that sounds like they're panned hard left and right are pushing my speakers a little more than I like,I use KRK Rockit5. I cant turn it up loud
because of the heavy bass sounds not being centered. I'm no pro but maybe roll off your freq at around 60hz and adjust the levels on the kicks that's hard panned.

nice rhythm but the key of all the loops are off and it sounds a bit crazy, if you sort the key out it'll be a tidy tune

Not bad. I like the flow of the track. I agree with Mrbillionx on the point of "build up and break down" it kind of sounds the same to me. So far, so good on the right track.

I like the groove in your track..

Yeeeah man def could use some rymes toss it at me id be happy to show you...

a little more work but overall great sounds. I can hear someone flowing on this

Where is the build up and break down.

I guess people can rap on just about anything these days.

but I would think this needs a bit more work.