oreokoookizz

I can definitely hear the FL presets in this track. Not always a bad thing, especially the way you arranged the sounds. With some more pads, a few mixer presets, and a harder kick, this would be a very fun electric track. To conserve CPU power have you tried disabling sounds that you aren't using in FL?

I like the production and arrangement of this tune. The slow progression is always gnarly to me and the different instruments were pretty sweet. It had a nice pleasing sound to it. Just needs mastering on some of the main guitar instruments but other than that I really really enjoyed this. Keep the music alive dude.

i like how different the slow is. love the track man. i love tracks that our out of the oridnary. this is really hot. keep up the good work

Ok, cool. Just send me a message on here if you'd like my personal email address.

Hey dude, did you get that message I sent you about this track?

It's experience dude, that's all you need. I've had a listen through your tracks and it seems you're hovering around the electronic style and just haven't found your direction yet. Keep creating music and you will get better all the time.
There's usually plenty of forum discussion about production tips and tricks that are helpful too.

Dude this starts off bloody great, that beat and the guitar loop is damn cool. I'm not so keen on the synth sound, for me it's too light and airy sounding to fit in with what's going on.
I just picture the track going in different places. If you'd like to collaborate let me know, I think we could make something great out of this.

Like the perc/synth work at the start of this. If I was you I'd focus on that first part and expand it. Could be an excellent electro track, you got a good idea of rhythm. Keep it up man. Infact, if you send me that first part of the track, just minus the guitar in the background I think we could collab on this one.

Stay on it man, you're sounding good.

Hmm, could take this track in several different directions In places is sounds like quite a sick Grime track, in other places like Hip Hop. Interesting. Stay on it man.

This is a fun track. It kind of reminds me of the Mario Sunshine game from gamecube!

First of all Oreo being a "NOOB" is ok you have to start somewhere!
not a bad start the track just seems a little monotone like a sound track from an eighties nintendo game? try playing with your pan settings which is allowing parts of your music to be shifted slowly to the left and then the right use some reverb,but not alot practice makes perfect! perfect meaning your own satisfaction! keep em' coming !