Could do with making the hi hat a little more constant. Just needs something to bring all the elements together and make it sound a little less disjointed. Some good ideas tho man, keep them coming.
Not really my thing, so I can't say if it is good or bad for what you are trying to do, but I did not dislike it. Was peaceful and relaxing, the bells were unique and the down pattern made it feel slower than it was. Sounded clean and clear, maybe tone the bells back just a bit on volume about .5 - 1.0 dec
wassup wit it ae what i would do is change da title to somethin you say in da chorus. Try to make da song longer if you can atleast 3.30 minutes.Da flows are good keep tryna come up wit more similies and metaphours to compare ish.Vocals sound clean good work on da song.
lyrics are good, really good... only things that throws em off,, is that it literally sounds like your reading them.. recite them and memorize them then let em FLOW on the beat.. great work homie!! i aint dissin just givin constructive critism..
gotta nice flow and nice lyrics homie. only thing i think you should do is maybe but a little more feeling or emotion into to you vocals. sounds like your reading hahahaha. other then that hot ish. check out my track hey shorty and review if you get a chance. PEACE.
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Job well done
John
on chapeau by 1eyedoneder
anway 7,5 of 10
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on Dont Stop by 1eyedoneder
likin' the piano samples too
i believe it's by PianoSounds...
but i can't be 100% sure about it...
could by by Myhst too lol
the transitions could be alittle
bit more smoother
but overall dope track
keep it up homie
Respect from LA
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nice drum kit really dope piano n i mean really dope
nice blend here rlly enjoyed the intro too
pc
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on Pathway to cash day verse by 1eyedoneder
more swagger
harder beat too
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