the music is really nice - could use some tweaking but at same time the lyrics are like so way out there - slow it down some get organized with the flow you laying down. You can't just jump up in everywhere and expect it be be right.
very dramatic exciting track. very interesting from beginning to end. really drawn in. i like the use of strings, the siren to establish place, dramatic element, great mixing - use of drums. verse and then a chorus effective. you build intensity - and especially with faster rapping (double time) at end.
criticism? i don't know - there is always something else to do. maybe a break section - an extended instrumental solo - that would be an innovation in Rap!! what do you think
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criticism? i don't know - there is always something else to do. maybe a break section - an extended instrumental solo - that would be an innovation in Rap!! what do you think
awesome work
midisparks