MartinBarber
Addicted to breakdowns...
dj_machwar@yahoo.com, United States
Joined : 29th Apr 2010 - 15 years ago
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on Free me from myself by MartinBarber
Kepp them coming
John
on Dangerous Lingo by MartinBarber
Faved
John
on Blue Oceans feat DJMachwar by MartinBarber
on Hello Jeffierenee feat DJMachwar by MartinBarber
great guitar sound, great drums ...
the structure needs some more attention though (imo) ... I hear a little more chords in the a capella than just the two you used ... I miss a clearer difference between verses and chorus ...
but it's a nice and enjoyable track ...
good!!!
peace, rei
on Hello Jeffierenee feat DJMachwar by MartinBarber
on Venom MayZ Feat DJ Machwar by MartinBarber
it continued to get better though. maybe you could try to change the drum because it doesnt mix really good. (just the beginning 40 seconds)
if you lowered the volume of the string at 0:54 and rapped on the beat that came in on that one you would probably rap really good on it. i like your flows dude im just trying to give you the feedback you were asking for.
you have talent. you just need to listen harder to the tempo and let the beat come in. once you have the tempo and memorized or freestyled on your next song. ill check it out and let you know whats really up. im not trying to be mean im just trying help. and i hope that my review has been concise and helpful, have a great day and keep making music!