cool take on the pella. nice buildup. noticed however that your track is much faster than the original vocal track, maybe a slight tweak on the tracks to make them line up better.
that's pretty nice ...
great guitar sound, great drums ...
the structure needs some more attention though (imo) ... I hear a little more chords in the a capella than just the two you used ... I miss a clearer difference between verses and chorus ...
but it's a nice and enjoyable track ...
good!!!
Yeah..I agree with you...Unfortunatley I have no way to plug my guitar in right now so i gotta use loops for everything...lol..and I still dont know how to change the key of samples yet without changing the tempo...so ...I tried to make the beat be the thing that changes. After I get m new soundcard...I wanna do another version..if its ok with her. Thanks for the advice much appreciated.
Very nice. This house a very acoustic feel to it. Definetly agree with anomalyj about her voice. One thing about the drums is that I thought it could have been a little softer to match the tone of her voice. Other than that, this is a great track.
the beat is cool and you have a good voice. the beginning of your verse was off tempo though.
it continued to get better though. maybe you could try to change the drum because it doesnt mix really good. (just the beginning 40 seconds)
if you lowered the volume of the string at 0:54 and rapped on the beat that came in on that one you would probably rap really good on it. i like your flows dude im just trying to give you the feedback you were asking for.
you have talent. you just need to listen harder to the tempo and let the beat come in. once you have the tempo and memorized or freestyled on your next song. ill check it out and let you know whats really up. im not trying to be mean im just trying help. and i hope that my review has been concise and helpful, have a great day and keep making music!
Thanks for the feedback dog..its what im lookin for...I may think im a bad mofo at this but im not to proud to listen I wish it was me rappin'! Its an acepella from Mayz...from here on the site.I tried andtried to cover up that at the beginning but im still a beginner at fruity loops...bout 5 days in..but I just dl'd another acepella..advice on mixin it would be great...thankx dog..but i do plan on flow'n to my own stuff someday so the advice on that is solid...thanks.
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great guitar sound, great drums ...
the structure needs some more attention though (imo) ... I hear a little more chords in the a capella than just the two you used ... I miss a clearer difference between verses and chorus ...
but it's a nice and enjoyable track ...
good!!!
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it continued to get better though. maybe you could try to change the drum because it doesnt mix really good. (just the beginning 40 seconds)
if you lowered the volume of the string at 0:54 and rapped on the beat that came in on that one you would probably rap really good on it. i like your flows dude im just trying to give you the feedback you were asking for.
you have talent. you just need to listen harder to the tempo and let the beat come in. once you have the tempo and memorized or freestyled on your next song. ill check it out and let you know whats really up. im not trying to be mean im just trying help. and i hope that my review has been concise and helpful, have a great day and keep making music!