Marc1991

Its definately interesting.. kinda cool buildup of instruments. I just find the level of echo you use for the voices distracting, like way too much, apart from that its ok

This is cool! A nice tribute to this girl! I like the filtering on your vocals, and the performance is very good! Cool style! Well done!

And Soothy it is!
Good work Emarel. Even if there is no real "melody" the song builds a good atmosphere and it is relaxing.
I think this is a great ambient song.
Good work.
Domenico

PS: and please feel free but don't feel forced to "check out my tunes", I just comment what I hear because I like sharing my thoughts with all the guys round here in looperman... lots of good stuff to be found on this pages!

Not bad man!
I like this "bare sounds" approach.
Very dry and direct arrangement for a good song, with a bit of sadness.
I wish you to write the second chapter of the song soon
Take care,
Domenico

What this song really needs is stacks of overproduction and masses of Autotune lol. Nope it's fine as it is lol. I like your voice it's very clear and reminds me of nobody I have ever heard so that's a good start. Like the mix of vocal effects and the finish is weird but I like it. Kinda like the way your relationship ended. It just slowed down and your waiting for it to pick again. Hope you get to watch the sunrise real soon.

Really nice song!
I can feel the dark light of a black and white rainbow...
The monochromatic progression...
A wave made of light and shades.
Good job! :D

Very nice.
Good Ambient sound!

I have zero tips so I'm not much help here, but I like your track, I agree with AnomalyJ regarding the intro. I think its a good start, keep going and you will find what you are looking for.

Kyle

Hey man, lots of good ideas goin on, and hearing lots of fl studio sounds that i've worked with at some point or another, so that's always fun haha. One thing i'd probly do is just mess with the synths a bit more in the mixer to give em a little more intensity. Add some FX, play with EQ's, maybe through in a couple automation clips, that sorta thing. But that's just all the nit-picky finishing touches stuff. It's def sounding good as is, but i think there's room to get a little more out of it. I'm less than a newb when it comes to this style, so take my words with a grain of salt, just tryin to brew up some ideas haha. All the best man, Brent

Hey Marc, I'm with Mike and don't really know what house music is all about haha. BUT, I don't think i've ever heard anything like this, so i gotta give a hats off to the unorthodox approach. Keep bringin the tracks man, sounds like you have a good handle of the software and a unique vision, so let it grow bro haha

Man I really don't know anything about house music, but I can tell you that it sounds good coming thru my system. Interesting panning
and transitions, but I guess that's house music right? I can turn it up loud with no distortion, so good job.