ok i can let u rap on this track but first let me hear a rap song that u have done.....if your skill are tight u can get the beat and even post it up on here..
Feeling that man, need to beef or double that kick up and really bring it out. Maybe double the snare too, just for some extra definition over the rest of the track. Nice work man, keep them coming.
its iight, i like it to an extent. it has this feeling like your waiting for the beat to drop and it just kinda-doesnt. thats just my opinion tho, other than that nice track,
Hello!
Your composition is good, but I think that at a moment, you can introduce other lyrics or instruments to make rupts, to create something which doesn't like a mechanical loop, even if there are evolutions in your composition.
I write down that, because I fell that after one minute, this melody can evoluate in a cetain way.
But that's only my opinion.
Good idea.
NICE CONCEPT i think you should change the beat up some
give the listeners something to miss like the chorus part of a song everybody loves when that chorus come back around holla tho
yeah bro this is dooope. this is fresh as hell. this is some chillin music right here. fire. that melody is sick and i like the drum choice and that crazy snare, very unique bro good stuff.
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i love the sample its hot
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e.T.e
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Good job!
Greez DJ-DOUBLE
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rocky production :)
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EDIT: You're well on your way man, I'm not there myself yet.
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Your composition is good, but I think that at a moment, you can introduce other lyrics or instruments to make rupts, to create something which doesn't like a mechanical loop, even if there are evolutions in your composition.
I write down that, because I fell that after one minute, this melody can evoluate in a cetain way.
But that's only my opinion.
Good idea.
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Some good elements in here man, keep on it.
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give the listeners something to miss like the chorus part of a song everybody loves when that chorus come back around holla tho
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nice stringz
i agree tho i dnt think the gunshots fit in too well cuz it seems like a sadder type vibe
rlly bumps tho
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