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I'm on this track zapishklassnaya music, I'm on this track will write down the words I strip ... listen

The intro reminds me of the tv soap The Young and The Restless.
Great beginning. That's the problem with great intro, they need to be developed and evolve. I as well struggle with this at times. I think you can add more to it. Try variations or introduce more intruments. Give it life.
Great start to a potentially solid track.

realy chilled sounds. posibly some bass aswell, give it a little bit of depth. good stuff though.