Wow, good work on this one man. I like the way the vocal sounds punchy and up-close. The music is spot on, not too loud not too soft. It's really groovy. I like it. Peace,
Thanks. Been seeing your name around here for a minute. People even mixed our joints together before. Thinking it was that looperman favorites by buddahman, not sure. Appreciate the feedback for sure.
some nice ideas... some of the delivery is off in places...
but having said thats me being picky to a good track...it son the sort side which makes me think its a work in progress..
for me maybe you might think about moving those kick out of the centre just to give the vocal some more room.. try making two instances of the kicks and panning one left and the other right .. just a little that is have one at say 2 o clock and the other at 10 o clock... just an idea..
ok..i read the other reveiws below, and yeah i get what your doing bro..not feeling the track totally, but only because i thought somewhere half way through the beat shoulds kicked into a hard kickin drum beat and low bass line for you to spill your lyrics over..
keep doing ya thing bro!
maybe you freestyle aswell as writing to some tracks,i reckon you could do both no probs
Peace!
Haha your funny man, you do not know hip hop at all. If i were to practice and rehearse it, it would not be a freestyle at all. It would be another "Fake" freestyle with me reading off a blackberry. Your words are better suited for a actual "song". To each his own, good looking on atleast tryin to listen.
Thx. Purely from the heart right here. Beat was what inspired what you hear. Want some vocal? drop beats to keith89115@yahoo.com Ill rap on anything except techno.
Thx. Beat part of my campaign to freestyle on any and all beats, every 2 weeks. This beat inspired me in a diffrent way. I enjoyed it. So posted it. I agree its not polished. i wanted it raw. I like trying new things.
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but having said thats me being picky to a good track...it son the sort side which makes me think its a work in progress..
for me maybe you might think about moving those kick out of the centre just to give the vocal some more room.. try making two instances of the kicks and panning one left and the other right .. just a little that is have one at say 2 o clock and the other at 10 o clock... just an idea..
nice track
keep 'em coming brother
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Malook.
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keep doing ya thing bro!
maybe you freestyle aswell as writing to some tracks,i reckon you could do both no probs
Peace!
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if you going to freestyle at least practice before you lay it down.
another beat won't save this at all.
practice makes perfect get comfortable with your material
then go for what you know.
rambling on and on isn't a showcase here
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Your voice is real good and you killed this.
Just get a better beat man!
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Nice rap and I like your vocals.
John
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Hot stuff!
Great Job!
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Just uploaded.
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Big respect!
Keep doing your thing!
Greez DJ-DOUBLE
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