moonkill60

Really looking forward to when you finish this track, my friend, it sounds great so far.

John

Good start, I think you are onto something. Its a creepy horror-flick type lyric, I am waiting for the drums and distorted guitar to kick in

i instantly thought of marilyn manson, could use more lyrics, and if it was longer that would be pretty cool too. id say the vox are actually disant enough to listen to, but they need more energy to them. other wise its not too bad of a start

mmm, i like the song, nothing much added to it like drums etc that gives it a nice atmosphere to the song.
Nicely done.
By the way, your voice reminds me of Cobain, and nothing wrong with that.
Keep the good work

Yea Yea Yea Big Big BEAT. Sick Tune. Loving this One!

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