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Pretty good track, There isnt a really definitive drop which would have in my opinion would have made it better, Still a good track but for your next one try to make the drop better after the lyrics + buildup

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I think this track has a lot of potential. I really like the vocals (i would love to have a copy of that acapella), and the synths you have going on. However, the bass drowns everything else at times, and the drum pattern does not seem to progress from the intro pattern. Personally, when i write Drum N Bass, I like to use really snappy Snares. I feel that the snare you chose would be better for some house music or something not so epic... Like i said before this track has the potential to be a very powerful DNB track, I can see where you wanted to go with it, but your not there yet... Please continue to work it.

PS: Please do not be offended, this is my honest constructive criticism :-D

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good track very dark track..nice

I like this man, your wobbles exactly the same as the wobbles i first started using, big up for the dubstep much love

i like this style nice and heavy and arker than dark siiiiiiiiiiiick 1 bosss.

Wow, awesome voice. Wish it was a smidgen louder. Beautiful.

Nice, bit strange using a house accapella in a dubstep tune, but it kind of works. I made a house version check it out...

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Yeah It's got a different kind of vibe. Don't know rather to think grimy or pretty lol. Pianos are beautiful.

Very nice song............

Wow! the sound you got here is HUGE! I like the way you use movie samples in your tracks. It sounds like you got a digital distortion goins on in there. You def have the dubstep genre down. Good Work!

Dude, you got the bass soundin mean as hell in the track! I like the saw synth weavin in and out! ...Damn this is some creepy stuff! Very nice use of the Jigsaw samples. Awesome song dude! Great arrangement and filter work!

this is awesome haha! love the full metal jacket touch. is some of that wobble bass scream distortion from reason? i havent added scream to my wobbles before, if it is i will have to try that out!

damn !!!!
i like beatz with movie samplez
is a nice one !!

Nice track, drums almost sound like a beat box. Well realised, interesting instrumentation and a good piano line. With a little Dubstep in there for good measure. Cool track man, keep them coming.

sounds like an inspirational song till the end thats why i love it and the slowed down vocals i could here lil wyne on that trak 8 out of 10

I'm contacting you on behalf of Mr Larry Heard (Fingers Inc) who has granted me the power of attourney to prosecute you for an unlicensed and wanton use of the vocals from "Can you feel it".... Good sampling and good track, I'd finish this if i was you... Lots of underground potential.

Heyyy..superb sound man, that wobble is awsome..it is obvious that you spend a lot of time on it. It left me feeling very positive!

Yea im liking this man its a likng the harsh wobble ... contrasts nicely with the wet wobbles.... what software you using

i like it. i quite like that the sub bass kinda cancels out the beats at times. just sounds foreboding like that bassline is unstoppable. the higher frequency synths are awesome. has a portishead kinda feel to it with those vocals.

This track sounds great... I love the saw vocals really adds to the track and the beat and everything is on point Nice work!

that drop is sick. but i dont think the gun shot is necessary. thats just an insignificant personal preference, tho...
loved your cutting and use of the film samples.
and im actually gonna agree with dv8 [ONLY in relation to this specific track, tho]; that the wobble is a tad much on this one. dont get me wrong...i love it...i just think it overpowers the piece. think of a dish with just a tad too much salt: salt's good...brings out the flavors in a dish, but just a pinch too much and the dish becomes really hard to digest.
but the drums on this are killer. and i really like the arrangement of the piece. solid production value, as well.
nice job!

Greate work, that one is bangin!

this tunes intro is gd man as is the rest of the tune but try and layerit a bit more to make the tune have some reall power like reso smash your face if u have heared it that would make this tune sick eneyway dig ur flow keep it up

hey man, sick tune! that drop is gnarly as hell... only thing i would say is loose that default fl hi hat, and throw some open / closed hats in to give the beat more shuffle...

anyway, def a cool groove, and nice use of the samples, good work!

-- :p alright i figured i was probably wrong lol

whoa where did those vocals come from!!!! Crazy insane...I dig the way its a bit offbeat and dark...Nice.