So, Holoz, I'm assuming that you are doing the vocals.
I listened to some of your other tracks on SC (I very rarely do that as a matter of principle) and the vocals there were the same voice and very good. You obviously have a good sense of how to make this kind of track. Melody lines, phrasing, and rhythms are very contemporary. (I'm hopeless at writing this kind of track, although I'd like to be able to do it!).
My constructive comment is that I think the track needs refinement, tightening, and probably shortened. And, probably more work on the backing arrangement so that it maintains interest and momentum with variation as the track progresses. I subscribe to the theory that something new should be threaded in every 4 bars. I routinely violate that rule in my tracks, but I'm inherently lazy! :)
Hey Eric first off thanks for hearing my stuff out, in regards to your comment yes they are my vocals and yes this song a swell as many more of mine needs work. My main problem is not workflow but how to complete the song to make it appeal mainstream. This includes mixing but more importantly mastering( which i'm trying to ever so learn to the best of my ability while trying to create) If you have any more advice don't be afraid to tell me i need it. Once again Thanks.
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Well done.
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I listened to some of your other tracks on SC (I very rarely do that as a matter of principle) and the vocals there were the same voice and very good. You obviously have a good sense of how to make this kind of track. Melody lines, phrasing, and rhythms are very contemporary. (I'm hopeless at writing this kind of track, although I'd like to be able to do it!).
My constructive comment is that I think the track needs refinement, tightening, and probably shortened. And, probably more work on the backing arrangement so that it maintains interest and momentum with variation as the track progresses. I subscribe to the theory that something new should be threaded in every 4 bars. I routinely violate that rule in my tracks, but I'm inherently lazy! :)
Anyway, I'm impressed. Nice work!
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