The vocals are perfect for a track such as this, i write a lot of poems that tun into songs also, creativity is everything, keep at it, making music is about putting your own stamp on something and owning it...WTG!
Thank you sweetcherries. I have several more on the way. Glad you like it. If you'd like to download a copy, I can set it up so you can download. I would love for somebody to be playing my stuff somewhere in the world.
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