you need to slow it down a bit to mayby 175 bpms cos it is fast your vocals are a little offbeat from the overall tune it self and i kinda get lost once the tune breaks you need to have a look again at your tune and sort this out mate but well done on a good effort at makeing a dnb tune check my tune out syntholigy you will like it it has a steady speed or check out my tune divison active that has a load of vocals init there very good tunes mate but with the right structure of your tune it could sound good any hows check bak on you soon ok mate
on Tonight (DnB mix) by sam211192