thanks man i appreciate it...it was somthin i came across n just went with it...right now its at http://coast2coastmixtapes.com/audiodetail.aspx?audioid=50836
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I agree with easy, either back up the backing track or bring out the vocals. You sound good, but you are hard to hear. It's a good thing when people say, I want to hear you ;-)
Anyways, it's still a very good track and definitely shows a great deal of talent.
thanks i appreciate it...ya i kno its a lil hard to hear my vocals..it was just because i ddnt kno how to really use da software at da time and it was my first time recording a track
I liked the ideas you have here: The base beat with the synth. Also, I feel that the rapping with the singing puts the song on a higher level that just rapping and singing alone. Wonder what this would sound like with even deeper base though while keeping everything else the same. Good work, this made me want to go write some music!
thnx i wanted to collab wit sum ppl but no1 eva hits me up i kno i aint da best on here but i always have good ideas right now im workin wit dis dude young rizzo from here n we gone need sum1 who can sing a hook
the vocals are to quiet, and also need to be compressed, or cleaned up in some way, other than that the rap itself is iight, but its an iight track, oo and the beat melody needs to change somewhere or sometime, its too repitive,
but dont get the wrong idea, its a decent track, just always keep trying to get better and always stay focused
If you don't take critism well, please do not read: This is just an opinion.
Singing was tight until about half way through the female sounding vocals say, "Close your eyes" and afterward. Too much effect. Beats tight. Try to talk your vocals out a little more and a little less rapping. It'll allow people to feel what your saying rather then trying to listen to what your saying through your flow.
Just my opinion. With no changes (C), with the changes I suggested... (B to a B+)
thanks for the review i really appreciate it...and i do agree with u i was thinking the same but i wasnt sure but i came out with another new song called "i get money" go check it out n let me know wat u think...thnx
yea i appreciate it. it was intesting working on it n no it doesnt offend me because i was thinkin the same thing too but hey having other peoples advice is wat makes the artist improve and wat to improve on to get better...but thanks for being honest and thanks for the review
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Anyways, it's still a very good track and definitely shows a great deal of talent.
John
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the vocals are to quiet, and also need to be compressed, or cleaned up in some way, other than that the rap itself is iight, but its an iight track, oo and the beat melody needs to change somewhere or sometime, its too repitive,
but dont get the wrong idea, its a decent track, just always keep trying to get better and always stay focused
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Vocals are taken correctly.
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Singing was tight until about half way through the female sounding vocals say, "Close your eyes" and afterward. Too much effect. Beats tight. Try to talk your vocals out a little more and a little less rapping. It'll allow people to feel what your saying rather then trying to listen to what your saying through your flow.
Just my opinion. With no changes (C), with the changes I suggested... (B to a B+)
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I can only suggest you put more like not to offend , passion in your spiting ?
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