MattyBombShizz

Although there are other rooms for improvement i suggest investing in a higher quality microphone ;)

I hate pop music but i will try to be obiective.
Ehh i think beat is cool and atypical
I dont like what you did with voice its to loud and it dont blends intro music.
hope my comment will help you
peace

Simple melody are always catchy. I like this song, it would be great if you did more to it, i know i could if i had the piano and the vocals separate.

Love to hear more.

Nice one..

i would consider stepping back from the mic a few inches and give her...it sounds like your afraid to commit to your voice. dont be so timid man. then once uve done that, duplicate that vocal track twice, and pan the copies slightly to the left and right, and ull get a gorgeous and full sound.

cheers